don't you think the light is a bit strange? on the helmet, the left area should be brighter than the right because the light is coming from the left right? also in the pants? i'm sorry. no offense just some idea >_<
btw i have explore another work in your gallery, teach me master!!!
lately i'm learning about digital painting but my black white value still bad hehe, i need some crit but i think my work is very bad as no one would check it and crit it, i'm self taught artist so yeah.. if you dont mind, may i have some crits too? heh
how you define the form using value, ist about feeling? or there are any easy way? are you apply the texture in grayscale or color?
please check this if you don't mind [link] are there any way to make it looks better? don't worry if your crit would hurt me alot, i'm OK with that and please be honest hehe, i'm really need some feedback to improve my work
well id say start in black and white and do alot of work in black and white just to get more comfortable in value, try to paint simple objects and get those looking right before you move on to more complex things, and look at photos of the thing youre working on, cause otherwise you're just making it up.
fine im just kidding haha i absolutely love the exploration of different color palettes! wooo hoo!
ok crits wise (since i know you demand them), definitely push the gesture. get the energy through the pose so that he/she/it and establish a weight bearing leg. (I SOUND LIKE BEVERLY!). even though i see beginnings of a slight slant in the shoulders/hips, dont be afraid to push it! GO LOOK AT THOSE PICTURES I SENT YOU. even if you draw them ugly, once you get back to sketching your own stuff i promise you you'll have more movement to your gestures